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"that's Enough…"
 
"that's Enough…"
 
 
"Failure. Weakling….your mother and sister delighted in being ravaged and joining the coven…"
 
"Failure. Weakling….your mother and sister delighted in being ravaged and joining the coven…"
 
 
"No…"
 
"No…"
 
 
"No Son of Mine would've let that happen, I would have bred a warrior not a Coward!"
 
"No Son of Mine would've let that happen, I would have bred a warrior not a Coward!"
 
 
"I am no son of yours, Corpse, my father is Dead…."
 
"I am no son of yours, Corpse, my father is Dead…."
 
 
"Your father considered you dead too"
 
"Your father considered you dead too"
 
 
"I said ENOUGH!!!"  
 
"I said ENOUGH!!!"  
  
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He heard the sound of heels on the wooden floor, and suddenly the fireplace erupted and light flooded the room, shocking his eyes for a moment but he tried to shake it off quickly to get his bearing and on the chair by the fireplace, sat the 12 year old girl, the girl he saved, she looked so innocent, so afraid "Please sir, help me, they took me from my father and raped me, they almost killed me trying to carve these weird symbols on my body…it was it was…." She sobbed burying her face in her hands he ran to her side and placed a hand on her shoulder "there there, it is over now, you're alive…we will be alright….we will be…"
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He heard the sound of heels on the wooden floor, and suddenly the fireplace erupted and light flooded the room, shocking his eyes for a moment but he tried to shake it off quickly to get his bearing and on the chair by the fireplace, sat the 12 year old girl, the girl he saved, she looked so innocent, so afraid "Please mister, help me, they took me from my father and raped me, they almost killed me trying to carve these weird symbols on my body…it was it was…." She almost sopped burying her face in her hands he ran to her side and placed a hand on her shoulder "there there, it is over now, you're alive…we will be alright….we will be…"
  
 
"It was…." She looked up to his face and grinned as her eyes turned blood red "It was riveting!"
 
"It was…." She looked up to his face and grinned as her eyes turned blood red "It was riveting!"

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