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The small girl nods, glancing back down at the mirror and the moment of frozen history with a wistful look.  Her large green eyes taking in the image of Velvet.  "I do understand, Katya.  Its hard watching everyone else live their lives while mine is frozen in time.  I may never have things like this.", she says as she gestures down to the frozen image.   
 
The small girl nods, glancing back down at the mirror and the moment of frozen history with a wistful look.  Her large green eyes taking in the image of Velvet.  "I do understand, Katya.  Its hard watching everyone else live their lives while mine is frozen in time.  I may never have things like this.", she says as she gestures down to the frozen image.   
  
Her large eyes begin to water and a sniffle starts.  Her attention was focused on the image of the resplendent bride.  She looked up from the picture to Katya.  It's easy to forget that even with the maturity of her years in the Shop that she was still a little girl.
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Her large eyes begin to water and a sniffle starts.  Her attention was focused on the image of the resplendent bride.  She looked up from the picture to Katya.  Its easy to forget that even with the maturity of her years in the Shop that she was still a little girl.
  
 
"I want to know if I'll have a wedding like this...", she sniffles.  I want to look beautiful.  I want to have all the eyes on me like I bet they did with Velvet.  Muttering how beautiful and happy she looked."
 
"I want to know if I'll have a wedding like this...", she sniffles.  I want to look beautiful.  I want to have all the eyes on me like I bet they did with Velvet.  Muttering how beautiful and happy she looked."
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"I am near insulted!" she barked in an aristocratic accent as she leaned back to give Amanda the squinty eyes.  "I am Katya Svan!  Spinster sibling of Master Thorton Svan and poshest of Hyde Park carriage owners!"  The gasp she gave now was loud and theatrical as large, pale gray eyes blinked vapidly at Amanda.  "To have you weeping at the thought of spending the rest of your life burdened with my boring, entitled and possibly addled self...a diamond of the first water!"
 
"I am near insulted!" she barked in an aristocratic accent as she leaned back to give Amanda the squinty eyes.  "I am Katya Svan!  Spinster sibling of Master Thorton Svan and poshest of Hyde Park carriage owners!"  The gasp she gave now was loud and theatrical as large, pale gray eyes blinked vapidly at Amanda.  "To have you weeping at the thought of spending the rest of your life burdened with my boring, entitled and possibly addled self...a diamond of the first water!"
  
"It's backfired.", she says through sniffles. "Myrios gets it wrong sometimes too." She wipes the back of her hand across her eyes to clear the watery filter from her vision.  "Katya.  The gift was wonderful.  Thank you for showing me.  It means a lot to me.", she says in a ten year old's voice, her words and bearing much more mature than her stature.
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"It's backfired, she says through sniffles.  She wipes the back of her hand across her eyes to clear the watery filter from her vision.  "Katya.  The gift was wonderful.  Thank you for showing me.  It means a lot to me.", she says in a ten year old's voice, her words and bearing much more mature than her stature.
  
At the tentative embrace Amanda clings to Katya. "You do, but would you know me?  I'll know you because of now but..will I be a stranger to you?", she says shakily, tears staining her cheeks.   
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At the tentative embrace Amanda clings to Katya"You do, but would you know me?  I'll know you because of now but..will I be a stranger to you?", she says shakily, tears staining her cheeks.   
  
 
She looks up at Katya after the theatrics, a soft smile on her face.  The tears still trickle downward but there's a certain quiet to the expression.  "You don't need to answer that.  I see so much, all of the time.  I know that you'll be there.  But I dont know when.  The order of everything is so mixed up.  I don't know what comes before what."
 
She looks up at Katya after the theatrics, a soft smile on her face.  The tears still trickle downward but there's a certain quiet to the expression.  "You don't need to answer that.  I see so much, all of the time.  I know that you'll be there.  But I dont know when.  The order of everything is so mixed up.  I don't know what comes before what."

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