William Lotorsson - Revision history

Procyon at 19:52, 30 March 2019

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 =• Early Life-WIP •=
-William hasn't been home for about twelve years now. At the tender age of fifteen, William decided he knew how to best live his life and skedaddled from Bum-fuck-nowhere to the ‘civilized world’.
+William hasn't been home for about several years now. At the tender age of fifteen, William decided he knew how to best live his life and skedaddled from Bum-fuck-nowhere to the ‘civilized world’.
 This went about as well as one would expect. A teenage kid without so much as a high school diploma slowly slipped between the cracks. William found himself resorting to things that, to this day, he refuses to talk about. Seven years of cheating, lying, periodic drug use, vowing to become a better person, breaking that vow, crashing on people's couches. William’s crawl out was fierce but slow. He did crawl out.

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 | nickname = UrbanCritter
 | image = WilliamLotor.png
-| organization =
+| organization = Knightsbridge Consulting
-| job_title =
+| job_title = Intern
 | aliases =
 | twitter = @wlotorsson
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 William. He works for the Illuminati. He gets the job done. He doesn't look back.
 =• Known Associates/Affiliations- WIP  •=
-William usually works alone. He left his old life behind and for the most part he seems content with not making new friends. Maybe it's time to change that.
+William usually works alone. He left his old life behind and for the most part he seems content with not making new friends.
 =• Special Notes- WIP •=
 William has a problem keeping his hands still- he often plays with something or works on something. Fidget cubes have proven themselves to be a boon for him.

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 | twitter = @wlotorsson
 | gender = Male
-| age = 27
+| age = 25
 | nationality = American
 | residence = New York, New York.

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 We hear the protest of a child, the cries of rebellion of a young boy who idolizes a father long gone. At the age of fifteen, a bag is stuffed full of clothes, and a letter is left on the bed, to be discovered in the morning.
-The boy discovers the grim truths. Raccoons and people are not the same. And yet the child becomes like one. The alleys become his bed, the trash cans his buffet. We see him, suffering in silence, wrought by regret. We see him become just another statistic, resorting to @+&@?!!!?@8$+
+The boy discovers the grim truths. Raccoons and people are not the same. And yet the child becomes like one. The alleys become his bed, the trash cans his buffet. We see him, suffering in silence, wrought by regret. We see him become just another statistic.
-The signal restabilizes. The boy has become a man. The first mask is put on. The previous name has been discarded. We see a love, a creative venue, opportunity to improve. We see hope, sweetling.
+We see the boy fighting for his life, resorting to acts that leave scars upon the mind. The boy is ashamed to this day, hiding the marks as deep as he could. Deeper than one would search.
 And now we impart our wisdom to the man. A second mask approaches, courtesy of the Eye. His life is fed to the flames. A funeral is scheduled. The man slinks away to New York, a blue tie hanging like a noose from his neck.

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 The boy discovers the grim truths. Raccoons and people are not the same. And yet the child becomes like one. The alleys become his bed, the trash cans his buffet. We see him, suffering in silence, wrought by regret. We see him become just another statistic, resorting to @+&@?!!!?@8$+
-Signal Disruption! Mortal instruments scramble our words and break our wings! The boy hides his past with all his might. Not even the wrath of the Eye atop the Pyramid scares him.
+??Signal Disruption! Mortal instruments scramble our words and break our wings! The boy hides his past with all his might. Not even the wrath of the Eye atop the Pyramid scares him.?? // unsure about this part. Alternatives?
 The signal restabilizes. The boy has become a man. The first mask is put on. The previous name has been discarded. We see a love, a creative venue, opportunity to improve. We see hope, sweetling.

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 =• Known Associates/Affiliations- WIP  •=
-Everyone knows someone.  What groups, people, friends, and relatives does your character have ties to?  Would other characters know them from a favorite hangout or a particular organization?
+William usually works alone. He left his old life behind and for the most part he seems content with not making new friends. Maybe it's time to change that.
+=• Special Notes- WIP •=
-=• Special Notes- WIP •=
+William's specialties are, well, to solve problems. He comes in, punches and shoots, and works his way through puzzles. He's about as stealthy as the brick he threw to get through your window.
 = •The Buzzing •=
 Our wisdom flows so sweet. Taste and see...

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 The boy discovers the grim truths. Raccoons and people are not the same. And yet the child becomes like one. The alleys become his bed, the trash cans his buffet. We see him, suffering in silence, wrought by regret. We see him become just another statistic, resorting to @+&@?!!!?@8$+
-Signal Disruption! Mortal instruments scramble our words and break our wings! The boy hides his past with all his might. Not even the wrath of the Eye atop the Pyramid phases him.
+Signal Disruption! Mortal instruments scramble our words and break our wings! The boy hides his past with all his might. Not even the wrath of the Eye atop the Pyramid scares him.
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 Are they demon-possessed?  A skilled Elementalist?  Want to describe their awesome powers or trademark equipment they always carry?  This is the place to do it.
- =•WIP•=
+=•WIP•=
 If your character existed in TSW (The Secret World) before coming to SWL (Secret World Legends) -- how do you treat the transition?  Are they exactly the same?  Did they suffer memory loss?  Are they some 'alternate reality' version of themselves?
-= •WIP •=
+= •The Buzzing •=
 Our wisdom flows so sweet. Taste and see...
 TRANSMIT- initiate the waschbär signal -RECEIVE- initiate the runaways syntax -I LIVE FOR THE SIMPLE THINGS- initiate the masked frequency -LIKE HOW MUCH THIS IS GOING TO HURT- initiate the betrayed child protocols- WITNESS- William Lotorsson.
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