Keira Nakamura - Revision history

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 =• Family History  •=
-Perhaps some day Keira will discover for herself the fact that her family has been sporadically involved with the Secret World for generations. The Dragon had been watching her for a reason. At least one paternal relative, from every other generation, was inducted into the Dragon as a (mortal) agent or informant. On the maternal side of Keira's family, many of the women and some of the men served the Council of Venice, the Templars, or fought as mercenaries.
+Perhaps some day Keira will discover for herself the fact that her family has been sporadically involved with the Secret World for generations. The Dragon had been watching her for a reason. At least one paternal relative, from every other generation, was inducted into the Dragon as a (mortal) agent or informant. On the maternal side of Keira's family, many of the women and some of the men served the Council of Venice, the Templars, the Dragon, or even fought as mercenaries of the supernatural.
-As Bees are rare even during times of crisis, it's hard to say whether anyone in Keira's family is an immortal like her. It might explain why the factions of the Secret War have taken so much interest in them.
+As Bees are rare even during times of crisis, it's hard to say whether anyone in Keira's family is an immortal like her. It might explain why the factions of the Secret War have taken so much interest in them, however...
 =• Special Notes  •=

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 =• Family History  •=
-'''''tba'''''
+Perhaps some day Keira will discover for herself the fact that her family has been sporadically involved with the Secret World for generations. The Dragon had been watching her for a reason. At least one paternal relative, from every other generation, was inducted into the Dragon as a (mortal) agent or informant. On the maternal side of Keira's family, many of the women and some of the men served the Council of Venice, the Templars, or fought as mercenaries.
 =• Special Notes  •=

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 A very friendly, relaxed, and outgoing girl. Lesbian. Often wears casual street clothes, or somewhat punkish attire. Enjoys cosplay when she gets the chance.
 =• Known Affiliations  •=
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 Keira was devastated, but continued to earn enough to pay the rent. She fought her growing feelings of depression and loneliness with bar-hopping, video games, socializing on the internet... She eventually got to a point where felt like she was starting to get somewhere in life.
-And then one night, while she was sleeping, she swallowed a bee.
+And then one night, while she was sleeping, she swallowed a bee. The Secret World, with all of its pain, horror, hardship, and excitement takes over her formerly ordinary life.
-{| role="presentation" class="wikitable mw-collapsible mw-collapsed"
+And she wouldn't have it any other way.
 =• Family History  •=

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 | <strong>TRANSYLVANIA</strong>
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-| Work in progress.
+| The mission in Transylvania was a fairly quick one. Once she had arrived and learned the current situation, Keira pitched in with the survivors of Harbaburesti as she had with the small towns that had come before.
 |}

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 == DISCLAIMER ==
 ''The following is a WIP full summary of Keira's actions throughout the Dragon version of The Secret World's plot, and each section contains total and unmarked spoilers for each major story questline. '''You have been warned.'''''
 The Secret World and its workings are a confusing thing, and Keira isn't really sure if she's actually making a difference, but she's having a hell of a time getting a chance to be like all of the  amazing women from her favorite games. Traveling the world is a blast - and she doesn't even need to pay for airline tickets!

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 She was a quiet kid, growing up, and didn't make friends easily. She spent the majority of her free time playing video games, and browsing the Internet on the family computer... When the phone line was free, anyway.
-For about five years after high school, she found herself in a limbo of low-paying jobs and unemployment. She got into a heated argument with her girlfriend at the time about her apparent lack of direction in life, and after a fight, they broke up - on bad terms.
+For about five years after high school, she found herself in a limbo of low-paying jobs and unemployment, moving between different apartments in cities and towns all over Massachusetts. She got into a heated argument with her girlfriend at the time about her apparent lack of direction in life, and after a fight, they broke up - on bad terms.
 Keira was devastated, but continued to earn enough to pay the rent. She fought her growing feelings of depression and loneliness with bar-hopping, video games, socializing on the internet... She eventually got to a point where felt like she was starting to get somewhere in life.

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 | Surprisingly, both sides of her family had been involved with the "Secret World" for generations. The Dragon, an Asian secret society dedicated to creating long-term order via short-term chaos, had been watching her since she'd been born. Once her Anima infusion was finished, they swooped in, so to speak, kidnapped her, and brought her overseas to Korea, with little explanation as to what was happening.
-Her vision of the disaster in Tokyo was all the convincing she needed to accept the Dragon's "offer".
+Her vision of the disaster in Tokyo, received as part of her initiation, was all the convincing she needed to accept the Dragon's "offer".
 ...Though admittedly, the unexpected oral-sexual release offered by a certain mysterious stranger helped. That's a hell of a recruiting tactic.

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 =• Known Affiliations  •=
-Patel, Mitra     (Mother; Deceased)
+'''Carson,   Nicole'''    (Lover;       Former)
-Nakamura, Hayato    (Father; Estranged)
+'''Patel,    Mitra'''     (Mother;      Deceased)
-Nakamura, Yoshirou  (Grandfather; Secret-Worlder, Deceased)
+'''Patel,    Sushila'''   (Grandmother; Secret-Worlder, Deceased)
-Patel, Sushila      (Grandmother; Secret-Worlder, Deceased)
+'''Nakamura, Hayato'''    (Father;      Estranged)
-Carson, Nicole      (Lover; Former)
+'''Nakamura, Yoshirou'''  (Grandfather; Secret-Worlder, Deceased)
 =• Background •=
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 =• The Story So Far...  •=
 == DISCLAIMER ==
 ''The following is a WIP full summary of Keira's actions throughout the Dragon plotline, and each section contains total and unmarked spoilers for each major story questline. '''You have been warned.'''''
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 =• Family History  •=
 '''''tba'''''