Adam Al-Untal - Revision history

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 | image = ADAM.png|200px
 | organization =
-| job_title =
+| job_title = Contractor
 | aliases = ADAM, Un'Ga-Al:Unt-Al.
 | twitter = @UnGaAlUntAl
-| gender = Neutral
+| gender = Neutral (He/It/Them/She)
 | age = 214
 | nationality = None
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 [[File:Adam.png|thumb|left|Faceless to all effects]]
-Adam will always cover their upper face behind a horse skull mask, a sign of identity that they have taken as own. It also serves as some sort of symbology. While protecting their vessel's identity, one could say that Adam themselves is the mask in front of it. Their short-medium hair will always look red, although not a natural tone, and runs always messy, but they doesn't seem to care as they just slicks it back. Behind the mask, the eyes will always have a red taint on them: both the irises and sclerotic. Under the clothing, the vessels are usually badly hurt (stabs, cuts, bullet wounds, burnts, electric damage...), but they seem to keep their functionality nevertheless. Adam is know for always picking fit, although not muscular, vessels, saying they're the most practical ones.
+Adam will always cover their upper face behind a horse skull mask, a sign of identity that they have taken as own. It also serves as some sort of symbology. While protecting their vessel's identity, one could say that Adam themselves is the mask in front of it. Their short-medium hair will always look red, although not a natural tone, and runs always messy, but they doesn't seem to care as they just slick it back. Behind the mask, the eyes will always have a red taint on them: both the irises and sclerotic. Under the clothing, the vessels are usually badly hurt (stabs, cuts, bullet wounds, burnts, electric damage...), but they seem to keep their functionality nevertheless. Adam is known for always picking fit, although not muscular, vessels, saying they're the most practical ones.
 It is also very hard to miss, whenever they are not wearing a hat to hide them, the pair of black horns that grow from the top of their forehead pointing forward, which might just be overlooked as part of their mask.
-Clothing is not one of their worries. They can be seen wearing anything in a casual way, disregarding of any type of fashion or utility, so far as to be seen wearing bloody and torn police officer clothing. In case of need, they will wear different sets of armor from Hell materials.
+Clothing is not one of their worries. They can be seen wearing anything in a casual way, disregarding of any type of fashion or utility, so far as to be seen wearing bloody and torn police officer clothing. In case of need, they will wear different sets of armor from Hell materials. Strangely enough, though it isn't needed, they have continued dressing their robotic vessel.
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 =• Psychological  •=
-You don't have to talk a whole lot with Adam to realize they are not quite human. They will usually bring up subjects or complains about human nature, if not about their own demonic one. They do show a mechanic hatred for the human species, even when all their current circles are humans and bees. It is arguable that they would suddenly switch from being kind and overall nice to wishing (and sometimes attempting) death for anyone surrounding them.
+* You don't have to talk a whole lot with Adam to realize they are not quite human. They will usually bring up subjects or complains about human nature, if not about their own demonic one. They do show a mechanic hatred for the human species, even when all their current circles are humans and bees. It is arguable that they would suddenly switch from being kind and overall nice to wishing (and sometimes attempting) death for anyone surrounding them.
-They are awkward. Just face it. No human social construct, politeness rule or behavioural code will have the slightest effect on their conduct, they will just say and do whatever they choses to.
+* They are awkward. Just face it. No human social construct, politeness rule or behavioural code will have the slightest effect on their conduct, they will just say and do whatever they choose to.
-Has a very crude sense of humor, if it can be considered humor at all.
+* Has a very crude sense of humor, if it can be considered humor at all.
-Does not know how to properly approach people, not to say sexual interests.
+* Does not know how to properly approach people, not to say romantic interests.
-Naming any sin will instantly catch their attention.
+* Naming any sin will instantly catch their attention.
-They are trying to catch up with human culture, but has gone only so far to the XVIII century. Any reference to later years will go over their head.
+* They have finally caught up with human culture thanks to a constant connection to the Internet through an uplink in his robotic vessel, gaining specialinterest in internet content.
-=• Sheol  •=
+=• History  •=
 [[File:Sheol.png|thumb|600px|right|Sheol cannibalises upon itself]]
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-As of recently, they have also achieved a somewhat pyrrhic victory on a higher rank demon that bound them to their previous vessel, Marchosias. This was, however, not without help.
+As of recently, they have also achieved a somewhat pyrrhic victory on a higher rank demon that bound them to their previous vessel, Marchosias. This was, however, not without unknown help.
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 * The Toolbox
 * Templar Inquisitor '''Kohen †''''''
-* [[Sisu_Ardafravash|Sisu Ardafravash]]'''.
+* [[Sisu_Ardafravash|Sisu Ardafravash †]]'''.
 * Stardust Industries
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 * Has killed demons, filth, humans, and angels.
 * Has not died.
-* Two entities inhabit whatever vessel they are currently using. The other one seems more chaotic.
+* Will often claim they're a source of misfortune and cause bad luck.
 * Plays with words and loopholes, but usually chooses to not lie directly.
 * Always smells like sulphur.
-* Muscles in their vessels are almost always rigid, like in a corpse.
+* Muscles in their human vessels are almost always rigid, like in a corpse.
 * Abuses their vessel by moving it in inhuman ways.
 * Body temperature is slightly higher than an average human.

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 * Leviathan Industries
 * The Toolbox
-* Templar Inquisitors '''Kohen †''' and '''[[Sisu_Ardafravash|Ardafravash]]'''.
+* Templar Inquisitor '''Kohen †''''''

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 | nickname = UnGaAlUntAl
 | image = ADAM.png|200px
-| organization = Leviathan Industries
+| organization =
-| job_title = Dog caretaker
+| job_title =
 | aliases = ADAM, Un'Ga-Al:Unt-Al.
 | twitter = @UnGaAlUntAl

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 =• Appearance  •=
 Adam will always cover their upper face behind a horse skull mask, a sign of identity that they have taken as own. It also serves as some sort of symbology. While protecting their vessel's identity, one could say that Adam themselves is the mask in front of it. Their short-medium hair will always look red, although not a natural tone, and runs always messy, but they doesn't seem to care as they just slicks it back. Behind the mask, the eyes will always have a red taint on them: both the irises and sclerotic. Under the clothing, the vessels are usually badly hurt (stabs, cuts, bullet wounds, burnts, electric damage...), but they seem to keep their functionality nevertheless. Adam is know for always picking fit, although not muscular, vessels, saying they're the most practical ones.
 It is also very hard to miss, whenever they are not wearing a hat to hide them, the pair of black horns that grow from the top of their forehead pointing forward, which might just be overlooked as part of their mask.
 Clothing is not one of their worries. They can be seen wearing anything in a casual way, disregarding of any type of fashion or utility, so far as to be seen wearing bloody and torn police officer clothing. In case of need, they will wear different sets of armor from Hell materials.
 Noone should worry about Adam being partially or completely covered in fire, as they will frequently set themselves ablaze with harmless flames for fun or entertainment.
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 =• Sheol  •=
 Voices speak, rumors spread. Un'Ga-Al:Unt-Al was presumably their first name, given to them by the one they were made from, a now missing Djinn which went under the name of Reshef. They had been a good warrior from Hell, but they had never visited Earth, for as most wars were factions and houses against themselves, brethren turning on each other for their leader's benefit. They had also never tried a meatsuit, but that changed when Reshef commanded them to get into a body of some Bee that had "died" in their domain.

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 =• Sheol  •=
-Voices speak, rumors spread. Un'Ga-Al:Unt-Al was presumably their first name, given to them by the one they was made from, a now missing Djinn which went under the name of Reshef. They had been a good warrior from Hell, but they had never visited Earth, for as most wars were factions and houses against themselves, brethren turning on each other for their leader's benefit. They had also never tried a meatsuit, but that changed when Reshef commanded them to get into a body of some Bee that had "died" in their domain.
+Voices speak, rumors spread. Un'Ga-Al:Unt-Al was presumably their first name, given to them by the one they were made from, a now missing Djinn which went under the name of Reshef. They had been a good warrior from Hell, but they had never visited Earth, for as most wars were factions and houses against themselves, brethren turning on each other for their leader's benefit. They had also never tried a meatsuit, but that changed when Reshef commanded them to get into a body of some Bee that had "died" in their domain.
-Un'Ga-Al:Unt-Al was told to impersonate the human and gather intel, as well as any possible artifact that could shift balance in Hell's power. With time, they would end up with the very essence of angels within their hands, while also having to face a darker entity than themselves. Battles were fought, but they ended up subduing the entity to a certain degree, reaching to an agreement with it to partially share their vessel. This would not go well to their patron, who punished them for the consumption of the very thing they was sent to bring, little did he know that when unconcious, but their vessel still awake, the other entity would completely take over to smite them.
+Un'Ga-Al:Unt-Al was told to impersonate the human and gather intel, as well as any possible artifact that could shift balance in Hell's power. With time, they would end up with the very essence of angels within their hands, while also having to face a darker entity than themselves. Battles were fought, but they ended up subduing the entity to a certain degree, reaching to an agreement with it to partially share their vessel. This would not go well to their patron, who punished them for the consumption of the very thing they were sent to bring, little did he know that when unconcious, but their vessel still awake, the other entity would completely take over to smite them.
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 Human nature. How distasteful, those apes using their many benefits they did not even think were able to be revoked in other cultures, other natures, for their own selfish approach to existence, degrading all those who did not have a choice.
-Adam's hatred for humans increased as they found out they were using all kind of creatures for their own gain. Speculating for money with the support of certain Hell factions. Hunting of vampires. Imprisonment and exploitation of various numerous races. They had spent some time in Hell, trying to show their brethren that there was choice, but those higher ranks who ran the wars for their benefit didn't like this. So they was given two more names, along with a stigma to carry on their own body and all their vessels, making them clearly recognizable may they try to interfere in Hell again.
+Adam's hatred for humans increased as they found out they were using all kind of creatures for their own gain. Speculating for money with the support of certain Hell factions. Hunting of vampires. Imprisonment and exploitation of various numerous races. They had spent some time in Hell, trying to show their brethren that there was choice, but those higher ranks who ran the wars for their benefit didn't like this. So they were given two more names, along with a stigma to carry on their own body and all their vessels, making them clearly recognizable may they try to interfere in Hell again.
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-They did, for some reason, achieve a job under Toolbox as a Requisitions Technician (that is, they are along with their supperior in charge of acquiring items people might ask them or Toolbox itself), and managed to keep it for some very long two months, even though they was very rarely seen actually working. They're also been seen a lot around Africa and Sheol, jumping between dimensions like they was chasing someone or something. For unknown reasons, Templars keep them in check even as they works for Illuminati corporations, so far as for to give them certain inmunity to their rules. It's been rumored that attempts to mess with them might bring some Inquisitors to check what is going on, so it is not advised.
+They did, for some reason, achieve a job under Toolbox as a Requisitions Technician (that is, they are along with their supperior in charge of acquiring items people might ask them or Toolbox itself), and managed to keep it for some very long two months, even though they were very rarely seen actually working. They're also been seen a lot around Africa and Sheol, jumping between dimensions like they were chasing someone or something. For unknown reasons, Templars keep them in check even as they works for Illuminati corporations, so far as for to give them certain inmunity to their rules. It's been rumored that attempts to mess with them might bring some Inquisitors to check what is going on, so it is not advised.

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-So was the hellspawn freed. That was certainly some conflicting situation for their nature, finding themselves with no orders to follow when they woke up. So they gave themselves a second name, Adam, which is the one they is most fond of. Adam soon found that they could choose, probably a side effect of the essence of angels being consumed and conflicting with their nature. They tried to be kind, to be a friend for those who they felt they owed their freedom, but they would soon hit a wall.
+So was the hellspawn freed. That was certainly some conflicting situation for their nature, finding themselves with no orders to follow when they woke up. So they gave themselves a second name, Adam, which is the one they are most fond of. Adam soon found that they could choose, probably a side effect of the essence of angels being consumed and conflicting with their nature. They tried to be kind, to be a friend for those who they felt they owed their freedom, but they would soon hit a wall.
 Human nature. How distasteful, those apes using their many benefits they did not even think were able to be revoked in other cultures, other natures, for their own selfish approach to existence, degrading all those who did not have a choice.
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-Rejected by their kin and an outcast for all those they tried to give something better, they now keeps traveling between Sheol and Earth, trying to be discreet while attempting to enhance the relationship between both sides.
+Rejected by their kin and an outcast for all those they tried to give something better, they now keep traveling between Sheol and Earth, trying to be discreet while attempting to enhance the relationship between both sides.
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-As of recently, they has also achieved a somewhat pyrrhic victory on a higher rank demon that bound them to their previous vessel, Marchosias. This was, however, not without help.
+As of recently, they have also achieved a somewhat pyrrhic victory on a higher rank demon that bound them to their previous vessel, Marchosias. This was, however, not without help.
-They is currently working for Leviathan Industries, company leaded by Arkham Blackwell. Their formal title is "Dog caretaker", and even though the full nature of their job is under a strict NDA, they can be seen running multiple other chores for the company, if not for Arkham themselves.
+They are currently working for Leviathan Industries, company leaded by Arkham Blackwell. Their formal title is "Dog caretaker", and even though the full nature of their job is under a strict NDA, they can be seen running multiple other chores for the company, if not for Arkham themselves.

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 | species = Hellspawn
 | player = Kz
-| nickname = ADAM
+| nickname = UnGaAlUntAl
 | image = ADAM.png|200px
 | organization = Leviathan Industries